Day 53: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: salty air/aria salata

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ENGLISH

salty air, taste of salt, taste of sea that you inhale in the nose, which makes you breathe, away from the smog, away from the mess of the city and life with its inhuman rhythms, created by humans who have nothing more human ...I like to go to the beach in winter and breathe deeply the salty air that makes me so good ... the dog runs and jumps, gets dirty with white and brown foam, emulsified with sand ... the winter sand, when the bulldozers have not stretched it well for the summer season, it's lumpy, full of twigs and shells, of skeins of algae, it seems a bit your hair, it seems you, so reserved and wild, yet beautiful ... I breathe you at night, while you sleep and you don't see me, and sometimes I imagine making love with you in the salty sand of the winter sea, but it would be too cold and then we would be full of sand that would make us be all itchy, like Toby who fills my car on the way back and then I have to operate the vacuum cleaner, something human created in inhuman way, and even the salty air can't make me out of this cage of human things for a long time, but at least it makes me pass the cold and makes me smile in the office, when the boss does not see me and I stop to think


ITALIANO

aria salata, sapore di sale, sapore di mare che inali nel naso, che ti fa respirare, via dallo smog, via dal casino della città e della vita con i suoi ritmi disumani, creati da umani che non hanno più nulla di umano...mi piace andare in spiaggia d'inverno e respirare a pieni polmoni quell'aria salata che mi fa così bene...il cane corre e salta, si sporca di spuma bianca e marrone, emulsionata con la sabbia...la sabbia d'inverno, quando le ruspe non l'hanno stesa bene per la stagione estiva, è grumosa, piena di rametti e di conchiglie, di matasse di alghe, sembra un po' i tuoi capelli, sembra te, così riservata e selvatica, eppure bella...ti respiro di notte, mentre dormi e non mi vedi, e talvolta mi immagino di fare l'amore con te nella sabbia salata del mare d'inverno, ma farebbe troppo freddo e poi saremmo pieni di sabbia che ci farebbe prudere tutto, come Toby che mi riempie la macchina sulla strada di ritorno e poi devo azionare l'aspirapolvere, cosa da umani creata in modo inumano, e anche l'aria salata non riesce a lungo a farmi uscire da questa gabbia di cose umane non vive, però almeno mi fa passare il raffreddore e mi fa sorridere in ufficio, quando il capo non mi vede e mi fermo per pensare

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Ciao!!! Che bel racconto breve che hai scritto, complimenti.
Vieni a incontrare la nostra bellissima comunità di italiani :) Se vuoi saperne di più fai un salto qui https://steemit.com/steempostit/@thenightflier/steempostit-perche-entrare-nel-gruppo
Ora non usiamo più telegram come scritto nell'articolo ma usiamo Discord. Per accedervi clicca pure su questo link per l'invito ufficiale! https://discordapp.com/invite/QDKPzSp

You are in great Italian company here!! We have @f3nix, @marcoriccardi and @thisgirl
And I agree, vacuums are inhumane :)
Today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-54-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-rain

Salty air seems healthy. I enjoy it too :)

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