Steemit Poetry Contest #13 - Bewitched

2년 전

Bewitched

A soothing shroud of silent, sacred night,
When sorrow sleeps and savage dreams flow true.
The sky reverberates a new star’s light,
My soul, alike, vibrates because of you.

Out of the corner of my eye, a ghost,
An evanescent shade of eerie might,
Female, enchanted spell in which I’m lost,
I, clumsy, earthly male with damn poor sight.

You laugh at me, but I’m already deaf.
I’m only a man bewitched just for love.
Your coven plays around me in alto clef,
Your dance is doom for me yet, a hell shove.

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This is my entry in @terrycraft Steemit Poetry Contest #13.


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I very much hope that you win!!! this is beautiful!

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My poem ended up at 4th Place, granting me 5 SBD prize! I will apply to future entries too ;) Thank you for the wishes

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That is fantastic!!!
For sure! Enter those contests!! That is how I grew my account the most. Over 2/3 is from participating in contests and giveaways!

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There's a lot of good poetry in the submissions. I hope to win too, but it's hard... thanks for the supporto! :D

This poetry is amazing for many reasons. The structure is rigorously respected, the rhymes are natural and match perfectly with the mood. Tip!

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Thank you for your words, I know they're true, beacuse you would have no qualms saying that I suck ;)

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I also have no quacks.

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Be enchanted with you writting! What a delight it is to read you! All right!

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Thank you very much, you're so kind!

(Como leo en tu perfil, hablas español...si te sientes más cómoda, sabe que lo entiendo ;) )

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Que bueno estimado, así es! hablo español o si prefieres el italiano en vez del inglés jeje. Ya se para escribirte en ese idioma, gracias por la sugerencia. grazie per il suggerimento! :)

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Benissimo! Io sono italiano e questo scambio di commenti in tre lingue mi diverte molto! :D

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Sono nato in Venezuela, ma ho anche la nazionalita italiana grazie ai miei nonni. A mi tambien me encanta el intercambio de idiomas! Es genial!

What a beautiful poem... I love the flow and the rhyme. The story behind the poem is... well... bewitching! Good luck on the contest!

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Thank you! I'm bewitched by your kindness :)

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You're welcome! Good writing <3

That's really beautiful! I would love to read more from you. My best part is:

My soul, alike, vibrates because of you.

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Thank you very much... sometimes I post some poetry attempt, but this is the first time I try a Shakespearian verse... usually I'm more freeform :)