Down Flow

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Variations..
Architectures,
Journeys
In silence.
Music is calming
A saddened soul
That became anxious.

Diversities...
Famed,
From an artwork...
New theories and old...
In silence too
and fume, -
They are laughing from the womb.

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embody difference
your abstract.

Thank you @nationall

I would love to read UP Flow :) one if you can make it :) . Nice visionary piece. In silence music is calming a saddened soul !!! That was brilliant imo :) . I am also happy to see you part of poets united family. Welcome thanks for joining us. You have to apply to become an active poet too with such lovely pieces :) God Bless. Peace and Love .

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The way i wrote was like:
In silence. (full stop)
Music is calming
A saddened soul
That became anxious.

As if there is this person having a walk in a city where everyone has gone (the city is actually his soul); and is all silence, as there is no one left there. He remembers a song, but cannot tell what it is, which through the rhytm tells him is okay, is going to be alright, you can go through even alone.

''Famed,
From an artwork...''
Out of that madness he wakes up and he throws colors on the experience, and the paint becomes famous.

''Famed,
From an artwork...
New theories and old...
In silence too
and fume, -''
People start analyzing the painting to deduct about the author and the technics he used to paint it. They're all intelectuals, old and new in their field.

''In silence too
and fume, -
They are laughing from the womb.''
Smoking cigars and entertaining themselves in a bar, all thinking about the painting and tell themselves how silly and simple it is and that they can do it and can do it way better.

It's the air of superiority and superficialism that those people and society has, which made the author isolate himself in that world (that he materialised it in the painting) . And the thing is, he already knew that this is going to happen, but it is like a never ending loop. He keeps seeing and understanding things that come real to observation once they're materialised and observed .

This was my thought when i wrote it. Thank you for giving me the chance to explain it . Have a lovely day Mr. Angel.. :^

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Hi @angelveselinov, thank you for the appreciation, is much welcomed in my home and heart. Yes i am part of poetsunited family, and someone from the group (i forgot the name as im bad with names) said i am already an active poet (im not sure exactly what does that mean though) . But, is there anyhow i can check whether i am or not ? And what would be my duties with such a role? As someone once said: with great poetry, comes great responsability, hahaha. Jk :^

God Bless.

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Oh you can contact me in Discord :) and we can talk about it. Our community is first of its kind where people who want to contribute and do so are becoming Restless Souls (Admins) in the group :) So there is so much you can help us with you got no idea :0 It is a matter of will and dedication :)

This is a brilliantly pungent piece - thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed this!

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Thank you @breezin, much appreciated :^ . How are you doing today :) ?

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Hey there - I am doing great thanks, and you?

Great post!
Thanks for tasting the eden!

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